A random thought on writing: I feel like relative sentence length is important. It’s jarring if they change length abruptly. Gradually shorter is the way to go. So that the action goes faster. And slightly faster. Quick. Like this. Then take your time. Stretch them out with care. Slowing the pace back to where it was before. Back again to the length of a thought, the pace restored.
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